beforward
I submitted this for a contest that the to the
Northeast Iowa Writer's Retreat put on.
I missed the bit where it was supposed to start with a thing about a dark
hallway. Ah shite. Regardless,
I stand by the happy weirdness that is this 500 word story. 500 words
really got me to stop and think and think and rethink what I was after. I
flew it by the seat of the pants, really with only the image of the old man at
the beginning, then the ending fell into place. First prose fiction I've written
in a long time.
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Sisyphonomics
The smart sound of coins, appearing first at his
fingertips, and then striking a methodically
expanding sum of riches at his feet, contrasted
the otherwise gentle susurrus of his absent
voice.
Mental calculations, passing unheeded
into stagnant air over dry and flaking lips,
lingered momentarily, as if amazed, then
dispersed, interrupted by the next gentle tink
of metal on metal.
He sat, hunched, tallying absently, coins
emerging from his fingertips every shivering,
aged breath or two, amidst the collected,
rusting milk cans, crumbling cardboard boxes,
rotting coffee cans, and yellowed bowls, caked
and choked with the dust and collected debris of
years, each overspilling with loose change.
Among myriad, prismatic bottles,
pitchers, banks, dishes, and basins of all shape
and design, each overflowing with coins, he
watched the old dog crisscross and transect the
still white snowfield, black coat inky against
the brilliant azure of the clear, cold, February
sky.
“…forty six”
A rattling breath in.
“Ninety nine five, twenty five eight, ninety
five nine and …”
A whispering breath out.
“Ninety nine five, twenty five eight, ninety six
oh-oh six…”
Animated surprise cracked otherwise placid,
yellow features, John Kennedy’s heavy profile
dropping loudly, the man’s dry lips, cracking
into a blood-flecked smile.
“Been while since we see you now, Johno” two
coins falling rapidly from his right index
finger, another from the left pinky, his slight
frame, grey and gaunt, shivering and giddy with
forgotten laughter.
“Faster they come today… faster now,” the old
dog barking at the door to be let back into the
murky house.
“Not so long now, not so long” while he walks,
ninety-five-ninety-ing to the door, coins
tumbling about his feet, rolling into dark
corners, joining, with a muted clink, forgotten
brethren, amongst cobwebs and tumbleweeds of dog
hair and dander, their faces and dates
reflecting at least a century of constant
counting.
“You see now old girl, free soon “ while smiling
at the open door, a wagging tail, her melting
prints at, on, then over the threshold,
crumbling, fading clues, steaming.
“Not you worry” as the door closes, attempting
in vain to keep the cold at bay, a sliver of
razor-sharp draft along the crooked sill,
two-five-eight-ing back to the threadbare chair
and the overfull basin, chipped, and bone white.
“Sure, we make the not-so-good choice, sure, is
not a good wish to make with bad, smiling devil,
but we, nine-seven-oh-two-one, free soon, free,
right girl?” with glistening eyes, smiling,
totaling, then freezing, horrified, coins
trickling uncounted in a jingling rain of
newfound despair.
“No, girl, no… please girl …what you do? ” while
chewing, smiling a devil’s smile, the old dog
sat eating the coins. |